29 January 2021 Friday Fictioneers

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“Father Reynolds ” tried to keep the wild-eyed woman talking. He had to admit that she made him uneasy. Especially since the room was otherwise empty except for a water bottle that she was fixated on.

“That’s where you and I are different.”

“Different? How so ?” The man pretending to be a caring man of the cloth queried.

“Because we both have kids that died suspiciously ?”

“No, you idiot. You see a water bottle and I see the water bottle that should’ve been turned into wine. ”

At that moment, the doors flung open and arrested the woman, who had just told them where to find the body.

Source: 29 January 2021

Published by amylasater

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6 thoughts on “29 January 2021 Friday Fictioneers

  1. I was so diverted by the doors opening and arresting the woman that I had to go back and read it again so I didn’t lose track of the thread of the story, which was really quite good.

    How about, “At that moment the police flung the doors open and arrested the woman. . . “

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